Some students choose a university because they have heard about the good jobs that students at that university get after graduation; others choose a university because its professors are famous. Which view do you agree with?

　　The reason why many students hesitate in choosing university is almost about the coming study and the predictable fierce competition in jobs. It clearly explains why I insist that the good jobs of previous graduates should be the determinant.

　　Sure, this does not imply that major learning can be neglected. 【先用讓步段進行補充】On the contrary, the earnest research is prerequisite from those precedents who get decent jobs. However, what I want to emphasize is that famous professors are not the guarantee. So many cases have been reported in those entitled researchers whose fame is not the insurance for their students’ projects. Few of them give notice to students’ learning as they put academic rewarding as priority. It is one’s effort and time devoted to study that renders the remarkable final assessment.【話語一定要繞過來】

　　Instead, getting the job offer is every graduate’s dream. There is no denying that university students are going to step into the society and a job is a must. 【強調工作對于大學生的重要性】Therefore, the offers of alumni indicate that the job-related preparation in this university is impeccably advanced. Students would be equipped with required qualities in editing resume, interviewing for jobs or relevant internships. Each is essential in finding jobs no matter in the past several years or at present even in the future. According to the research carried out by National Employment Institute, employers today show more preference to candidates with pre-set work-related skills. That gives a support to choose job-oriented university.【附加一個數據的信息】

　　Also, with the nice figure in help students get employed would promote the university’s fame. Not only would the practical skills be taken into consideration during the job application, but also [倒裝結構] the educational background. The well-known university plays an important role to stand out the applicants than others. Besides, the successful figures would sometimes be regarded as recommender with sound evidence for job-hunting, which is nearly impossible for famous professor since they can only prove their abilities rather than yours especially in the fields unrelated to their majors.【上面已經給過例子，這里用道理進行補充】

　　Consequently, we all agree that finding a decent job is the pursuit for any student and thus the college with good examples in jobs must be the one.