雅思大作文怎么結尾? |
Date: 2020/8/14 Visits: 547 Type: 考試資訊 Author: 合肥中皖外國語培訓學校-安徽省中皖科教服務有限公司 |
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雅思大作文結尾段無疑是全文關注度最低的部分,寫作者往往都傾向于一句話匆匆結尾,和俗稱‘牛身’的主體部分自是不能相提并論,開頭段雖然分值占比也不多,但畢竟是門面,印象分的存在足以讓作者花心思斟酌推敲。 而結尾段似乎已經固化成總結全文立場的一句話,以確保文章結構的基本完整。結尾段俗稱‘豹尾’,說明不僅僅簡潔,也可以有力更強勁地總結全文。 本文就個人理解介紹下如何利用文中內容,對文章進行妥善穩健地收尾。 觀點類議論文主流寫作結構五段式,即主體段兩段立論我方觀點,讓步段某種程度上讓步對方。結尾段寫作可以是簡單得總結文章主要內容,也可以根據讓步段正負情況提出適度建議。 即,如果讓步段為該事物可能存在的弊端,結尾時可以圍繞這一論述給出建議,也就是簡單填補自己支持方的漏洞,文章顯得更辯證理性。 示例(一) 例題: Good facilities can be found in cities but not in the countryside. Therefore, new doctors and teachers should be sent to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 解析: 該題探討是否支持將新人醫生和老師派遣到農村,正反方都可以構思出合理的論點,題型也沒有明確約束范圍,假設支持該做法,可以從農村和涉及者兩個平行方向出發,作為支持方的兩個論據: 1農村醫療教育基礎設施服務都很匱乏,處于劣勢,將老師醫生引入,有利于緩解這一困境(hospitals, clinics and schools are severely understaffed in rural areas, compared with their overstaffed counterparts in the city); 2對新人醫生和教師也有裨益,城市里競爭激烈實踐機會有限去農村可以增加工作經驗,并且可以少借助醫療設備和教學輔助工具,從而提升職業技能(To the doctors or teachers that graduate freshly with a degree only, working in rural areas enables them to enrich work experience within the shortest possible period of time)。弊端也很明顯,比如強制性分配違反人權,阻止他人追求更高生活質量的目標和愿望(compulsory assortment is not justifiable/it is not ethical to stop the desire of individuals for a more satisfying quality of life). 按照以上文章行文思路,讓步段的確認可題干做法所存在的弊端,結尾段在總結立場后,可以適當利用該段內容給出相應的建議,不應該強制性分配,應該尊重個人意愿,這樣顯得更合理,全文也可以圓回來。例如: To conclude, working for a period of time in the country benefits new teachers and doctors alike with increasing their work experience and meanwhile, address the service shortage facing those areas. However, the voluntary sing-up should be guaranteed, instead of mandatory assignment. 示例(二) 例題: Some people argue that history is of little or no use to us. Others believe that studying history gives many benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 解析: 教育類老題---是否應該學歷史,如果文章選取支持,可以從以下角度支撐:1. 學習歷史可以借鑒前人知識,以史為鑒,避免走彎路,做出更明智的決定(understanding the past contributes to people’s decision making in today’s social context); 2. 也可以提高人們的分析能力,看問題的辯證能力(It is not only to seek self-knowledge, but also to enhance their skills and make themselves all-round individuals);從反面來看,學習歷史也會有不可取之處,現在的世界日新月異,社會已經很復雜,過去的事情只有在特定語境下才有借鑒意義(the lesson from the past might be applicable in particular circumstances only) 根據這樣的文章思路,結尾段在重申個人觀點后可以根據主體部分提出的問題做適當的建議: As indicated above, studying history is of critical importance, particularly in increasing one’s knowledge and enhancing one’s intellectual abilities. However, it should not be attached with unjustified importance because its applications in today’s society are not known with certainty. |
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