雅思寫作話題高分原題如下：

In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food transported from all over the world. To what extent do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 20170513

典型的優缺點對比題型。開頭段還是背景介紹和點題。

雅思寫作話題高分范文：

In this day and age, thanks to the highly developed technology of transportation and extensive trade of food, people's diet has become abundant unprecedentedly. Notwithstanding, optimists and pessimists to this issue still have conflicting views on people's enjoying the food transported for thousands of miles.

主段一，強調長距離運送這些食物的好處。

Merits of this situation are fairly apparent. Transporting food from one region to another demands human resources working as logistics, naturally creating more working opportunities regionally, and in the meantime local economy can definitely be boosted by food trade. Besides, another positive consequence of local high employment rate and economic prosperity is that diet of people in another region is substantially enriched.

主段二，讓步段，反駁了一個壞處，既長距離運送可能會產生環境污染。讓步段，通常不會出現在主段二的位置。本文如此安排，是因為主段三還是讓步段。

People with adverse standpoints believe that long-distance transportation of food undoubtedly harms environment via carbon emission. Eventually, fuel switching and mass transport are two effective methods to deal with the destruction of environment. Transporting massive food by vehicles powered by clean energy like electric rail with reasonable freight traffic plan can extremely minimize environmental cost.

主段三，繼續一個讓步段。反駁了另外一個缺點，既長距離運輸可能會因此導致添加劑濫用。實則在監管之下，這不是問題。

Simultaneously, another possibly negative outcome is that some people worry about excessive use of preservatives commonly and widely utilized for storing and transporting food. In fact, primarily modern transportation technology is able to considerably reduce the time cost of shipping food from one region to another. (Most of Chinese living in major cities may have the experience of eating some fresh fruit in the evening that were picked up in the morning from some orchards 2 or 3 thousand miles away.) In addition, usage of preservatives is usually strictly regulated by laws in order to ensure the food safety.

由上文論證可知，這件事情好處一堆，壞處都可以解決。故而，這是一件大快人心的事情。結尾闡明筆者觀點。

To sum up, what people need to do is enjoying the ample diet without worrying overly about destruction of environment and issues of food safety that some people think might be caused by long-distance transportation of food.

通常而言，全文只出現一個讓步段，這樣結構清晰簡單。但是，本文另辟蹊徑用了兩個讓步段。其實邏輯上沒有太大變化